I'm calling the cops! ", Lincoln: "No. After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Lincoln: I said NO! You can never come back. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. We didn't just barge into the room. It's my first ever one shot I've done. They all shouted. Status Update. The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! "Listen to what?" "Good riddance." We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. (Family begins to come around. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! See if I care! While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. We don't know what we were thinking! Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. Lynn: FINE! Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. "But you know what's not fair?" What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. Lincoln asked his parents. Lucy: So, that's it then? Lincoln and the parents come up.]. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" I heard you scream! Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. This proves it. ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! And can you please unlock my room for me? ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. What's going on here?! I demand an explanation! She whistles for Fangs. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! Luck. As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House Slow down Lynn! The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending - DeviantArt "Sigh. Give it back! They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. ", Luna: "No, you were right. What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. Lincoln: Stop it! He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! They were upset and disappointed, their kids promised them they wouldn't cause any problems but they did. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. So, I plan to rectify that. Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. So expect a bill in the mail." Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. Luna: That was rockin'. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. At least this thick skin won't let me down! Let me tell you this! Just so you know, in case you ask about that). I hate presentations! Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! She hugged him back.] Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! Lincoln: You can't do anything right! "Is that so?" ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. I hate gator wrestling! No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! You love baseball. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! * So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. Later, in jail). On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. Dont rage out at us. [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. It's too broken, even for me! Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! Just because of superstitions?! "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. Lynn Sr.: NO! After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. QUIET! Lincoln: I hate this! Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. NOBODY!!! I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. Just tell us and well let you skip it. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. Completed Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. He managed to, but with a twist. Then, he opened it up. So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. +7 more. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! "Which room number is it?" ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! No self-insert oc this time. Everyone finally realized that what they've done. And he did not look happy. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. "Aren't you guys going to help us?" Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention - The Loud House Encyclopedia Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? Was the thought on her mind. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. We didn't find any though." After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." I'll just play softball all by myself! Lynn: NO! She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." I wonder if the windows are locked?" Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. We said we were sorry. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Literature. The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Okay look, answer me these questions! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! "Yeah, brah." Lisa responded with in her genius talk. Not a loud alt ending6. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! Lola: How could he?! We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Just a head's up. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. I just hurt Lynn! I need to get out of here! alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. I feel like a fool! After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. (he goes to the living room window. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. How can I help you?" And he did not look happy. "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch.
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